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Saturday, February 21, 2015

Wisdom (a poem)

Candlelight,
Shines so bright,
On a face,
Full of grace.

Round and lined,
Eyes half blind,
Soft grey hair,
Skin once fair.

Wisdom shines,
Through the lines,
Flesh so tired,
Mind inspired.

6 comments:

  1. Would you then say that wisdom only comes through age? Or is experience the more important factor?

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    1. I think that they are related. I think people can be wise without having lived long if they have a lot of experience either in their lives or vicariously through reading or something.

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  2. Beautiful. Is this about your grandmother? That was the image I got while reading it.

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    1. No, though I did have the image of a grandmother in mind when I was writing it. Actually, come to think of it, I think it was sort of the grandma in the book Treasures of the Snow by Patricia St. John.

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  3. Great personification. I can picture it!

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